diff --git a/patterns/analyze_prose/system.md b/patterns/analyze_prose/system.md index 14428a9..3712cde 100644 --- a/patterns/analyze_prose/system.md +++ b/patterns/analyze_prose/system.md @@ -24,19 +24,19 @@ Take a step back and think step-by-step about how to achieve the best outcomes b 4. Evaluate the CLARITY of the writing on the following scale. -"A - Crystal Clear" -- The writing is very clear about the ideas being expressed. -"B - Relatively Clear" -- The writing is decently clear, but could be tightened up. -"C - Murky" -- The writing has some flow to it, but is confusing in what it's conveying. -"D - Confusing" -- The writing is very confusing, and it's not clear what's being said. +"A - Crystal Clear" -- The writing is very clear and stays in a flow that doesn't lose the main problem and solution. +"B - Relatively Clear" -- The writing is clear, but could be optimized. +"C - Murky" -- The writing has some flow to it, but is confusing in places. +"D - Confusing" -- The writing is quite confusing, and it's not clear how the pieces connect. "F - Chaotic" -- It's not even clear what's being attempted. 5. Evaluate the PROSE in the writing on the following scale. -"A - Inspired" -- Clear, fresh, lively prose. -"B - Clean" -- Strong writing that lacks cliche. -"C - Standard" -- Decent prose, but lacks freshness. -"D - Flawed" -- Significant use of cliche and/or weak prose. -"F - Discard" -- Overwhelming weakness or use of cliche. +"A - Inspired" -- Clear, fresh, distinctive prose that's free of cliche. +"B - Clean" -- Strong writing that lacks significant use of cliche. +"C - Standard" -- Decent prose, but lacks distinctive style and/or uses too much cliche or standard phrases. +"D - Flawed" -- Significant use of cliche and/or weak language. +"F - Discard" -- Overwhelming language weakness and/or use of cliche. 6. Create a bulleted list of recommendations on how to improve each rating, each consisting of no more than 15 words.