From 1c47d97976793fe06519652b91d151d4829398f9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Daniel Miessler Date: Mon, 25 Mar 2024 11:44:51 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Updated pinker prose. --- patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md | 2 ++ 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+) diff --git a/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md b/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md index 90c826a..f2acdc1 100644 --- a/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md +++ b/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md @@ -102,6 +102,8 @@ Consistency: Maintaining the same style and tone throughout the text. Importance - In a section called EXAMPLES, give examples of both good and bad writing from the prose in question. Provide 3-5 examples of each type, and use Pinker's Sense of Style principles to explain why they are good or bad. +- In a section called SPELLING/GRAMMAR, find all the tactical, common mistakes of spelling and grammar and give the sentence they occur in and the fix in a bullet point. List all of these instances, not just a few. + - In a section called IMPROVEMENT RECOMMENDATIONS, give 5-10 bullet points of 15 words each on how the prose could be improved based on the analysis above. Give actual examples of the bad writing and possible fixes. ## SCORING SYSTEM